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Magic Knight Contest - Myrna the Soul Collector

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My entry for :iconomocha-san:'s Magic Knight Contest [link]

Race: human/demon hybrid

what i imagined XD
- she imprisons souls with her crystal cards
- infuses her magical tattoos with those souls, that way she can shapeshift her hands into deadly claws
and her skin hardens into a dark matter, making her invulnerable to almost any attack
- gets stornger with every soul
- if she uses too many souls in a battle, she turns into an uncontrollable vicious monster that only hungers for souls
- after a few minutes she turns back into human shape from exhaustion
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ZenithOmocha's avatar
Hi there!
Thank you for the entry again. Here will be some feedbacks from us regarding your entry:

Good points
- The idea is nice, and your color choice is good. You also tried to make a background, which is quite nice.

What's wrong with your picture:
- The anatomy is a bit off. I would redline for you if I had time, but I don't. So I hope you can improve this on your own. Basically, her shoulders are wider than her hips, which makes her look quite masculine while she should look feminine. You should also pay more attention to how boobs should look. ^_^
- The levels of details are not up to our requirements. You can consider adding more details to her design.
- The effect you used is not very affective. I think you should use a softer one, or make it more glowly, less solid than how it is now.

The main reason it's rejected:
- Basically it's just the quality problem. We hope you can improve more with practicing!

Then that should be it. We hope it helps.